On 28 May 2013 just past 10pm, two military policemen had rushed
over to alert us about a traffic accident that had just occurred in the nearby
vicinity. I was a combat medic on duty that night, and together with two other
medics we immediately rushed to the scene of the accident.
The scene of the accident was a complete mess. There were
car parts littered all over the road and sidewalk, an overturned motorcycle and
two victims lying motionless on the ground. We would later find out that they
were victims of an intoxicated hit and run accident. I attended to the male
victim while my other two medic friends attended to the female victim. Given
the nature of the injuries, treatment and immediate evacuation was extremely
crucial. I did some quick treatment and then activated one of the military
ambulances which was on standby, to take the more seriously injured female
victim to hospital. Soon after the female victim was evacuated, a civil
defence ambulance arrived with paramedics to evacuate the injured man.
Both victims eventually recovered fully, while the drunk
driver involved was arrested.
This incident has taught me that as medical personnel, it is
extremely important to keep our skills current so that when we have to use
these skills, we can apply them proficiently and calmly to achieve the best
possible clinical outcome for the injured.
1) I think you reacted very professionally in the given situation. Instead of being scared and nervous you did exactly what you needed to do as a medic on duty. GOOD JOB!!
ReplyDelete2) It is written with heart as I can feel his pride as a SAF medic. Hope you'll keep up the good work during your ICT.
a. What do you think about the event described?
ReplyDeleteI think you really described the event well. It was detailed and able to draw reader’s attention. Besides the event, there are also background information and lesson learnt to make the event complete.
b. Does this post strike you as having been written “with heart” or not?
Yes. Based on all the details of the event, I can feel that this is an unforgettable experience.
a.What do you think about the event described?
ReplyDeleteThe event was described well.
b. Does this post strike you as having been written “with heart” or not? How can you justify your answer. Explain in your feedback.
No. I totally cannot feel your emotion while reading this essay like how you feel when you see the victims. You should describe your thoughts, your feeling and your emotion besides what you did.
I think the event is well described with necessary details.
ReplyDeleteI believe you are writing it with heart as you shared a lot about what was going on in your mind. Good Job!
Thanks for sharing this traumatic event.
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